TimmyJake

THANK YOU Your reviews make me so happy! They're really great xD And nooooo, not that finger. I'll be somewhat decent :P Your reviews are so kind, too! And man, ...

Thank youuuu. This was an amazing review, and I agree with you about that sentence. It really does need work! I'll tweak it and see what I can do, using ...

When I read it, the first thing that came to mind is "why?", because there are so many other ways that are easier (and less disturbing) to get supplies and ...

I had an error. :_; I'll have to fix that. >> Thank you for such a wonderful review, Delonie! :) Aaaaand, the dialogue is boring? Eh, I agree with that. ...

I think the day I stop getting reviews from you is the day this novel becomes a bore to write. You're my motivation

Um. Oh. >> Me so dumb. xd Of course he would need to talk in his native language a bit! I'll definitely have to use that suggestion in future chapters/edits, ...

.... You have a very good point. By the second chapter, the reader should have at least a vague idea what the plot is. So when I go about editing, ...

YES - now action scenes are going to be that much more. Gun fights are always cool, but I personally love hand-to-hand combat better (funny - I'm starting martial arts ...

Thanks for the review! And yes, I will bring the girl into the book more as it goes along. Still not quite sure how she plays into it - whether ...

I feel so honored. :) Man, you have such a great point. >> Instead of walking around and chatting the whole chapter, they could be doing something of real worth ...

MIDNIGHT?! Go to bed, young lady! Nowwww. xD I will tag you, ofc. :)

I wish he could've kept his gun, too. Because, well, I loveee them. But it wouldn't have been realistic and all that, sooo I had to get rid of them. ...

I can be dad, or brother, or whatever you wants to call me.

Thank you so much, Rose!