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Re: Affinity 4.2 Avery
Thank youuu for the review, Annie! You know, I completely agree with you on that. Hm. I want to make her seem like a strong character, but weak at the ...
Jan 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 6 Ally
FIRST NEGATIVE WORDS Hm. perhaps I need to try and insert a bit more of his irritation into the chapters, just in a more subtle way than I do with ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.4 Ally
Their first day of training is going to be sooo much fun to write. heehee But that's a while away, yet. :( This relationship will be seen as you go ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.3 Ally
I kind of needed that reassurance for the length. I like keeping my novel chapters postings about 1500 words, but that never seems to work out. >< That sentence is ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.2 Ally
I agree about this not being my best, although 8.1 is worse. just warning you. >< I have really been trying to make them so much different, so they would ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.1 Ally
I looked the name up after I chose it to make sure. xd It was actually a name I made for a SB, and I just couldn't not use it ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery
Hm. I could transform this into a science fiction/dystopian/fantasy novel. YES YES YES. Thanks for the suggestion. Coming up next - dragons . Thank you so much for reviewing, Noelle.
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery
Hm. I could transform this into a science fiction/dystopian/fantasy novel. YES YES YES. Thanks for the suggestion. Coming up next - dragons . Thank you so much for reviewing, Noelle.
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.2 Avery
Thank youuuu for this wonderful review, Noelle.
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.1 Avery
Thank youuuu for this review, Annie.
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.4 Girl
Hm. You have a point about the guy. I need to remember to put more of her thoughts about him so the readers don't forget him. xd And thank you ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
My knowledge of English comes entirely from, uh, chatting with English peopleee. So your input is very helpful and much needed. xd More research, here I come.... Thank youuu for ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 8.1 Avery
Thank youuuu for this wonderful bloody review. I really do need to work on her swearing vocabulary. xd I am thinking about resorting to some home-made jobs for her - ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Jo, this review is, as you say, parfait. heehee Thank you for continuing on with my novel, and I also consider this as one of my best chapters. I believe ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 3.3 Girl
Thank youuuu for yet another lovely review, Annie! Thank you thank you for catching that redundancy. xd
Jan 25, 2015