TimmyJake

Timmy here! So you say that you have a tendency to write slowly, eh? Well, that may be true and your piece does move along a lot slower than a ...

Timmy here! So you mentioned that this part was a tad more emotional than the rest, and I think I would have to agree with you. Not that its a ...

Timmy here! I love your idea and the style you have, the descriptive images throughout and the gripping and emotional support. It really kept me on the edge of my ...

Timmy here! This will be the shortest review I have given you on Book Man, because I really don't know what to talk about, besides do a few praising paragraphs, ...

Timmy here! Sorry for the delay... There was a unfortunate occurrence during my travel to come here, involving a screwdriver, pink scotch-tape (don't ask), and a lawn mower from 1864. ...

Did I... meet a new character? Not just a new character, but one that seems very cool, and very... protective. Run, Christian. No, don't make that fire. JUST GO. It ...

Timmy here, as requested. Since this is a rough copy, I will not critique any grammar or punctuation issues I see, but try to remain focused on the storyline and ...

THIS IS THE LONGEST CHAPTER SO FAR. Do you know how much my eyes bugged out when I opened this page and started to scroll down? It. just. kept. going. ...

Timmy here! This was a very powerful chapter, and one we have been waiting for, for a long while. I remember the cliff-hanger end of the previous chapter, only made ...

Christian picked up a bucket, ready to swing it at whatever might appear Ya know, Christian, there are other forms of weapons. While I respect your usage of primitive weapons, ...

Timmy here! I see what you mean. Working with Jean's personality and making him change throughout the story has been difficult, but I think you have done very well with ...

Timmy here! I really don't know what to say. I can comment on this chapter, and mark it as a review cuz that is what the kewl people do--leave reviews, ...

Timmy here!! I am going to warn you ahead of time, since your work is near flawless here, I will have few nitpicks, and plenty of time for praise. Happy? ...

Timmy here!! Okay, I just noticed something!! All of this chapter has small references toward Jay not actually being a part of this world. He is just someone thrust into ...

Timmy here! So I wrote this review before, but then I accidentally pasted something in here... and the whole thing went blooey. SO here I am now. xD This chapter ...