TimmyJake

Timmy here! So this chapter really had a hopeful look to it, and really made me feel better about the circumstances. Rease did more than she realized, I think. She ...

Timmy here! So you say you wrote this chapter really quick, eh? I would agree with you and all, because, you know, people are supposed to be agreeable and all, ...

Timmy here! So now I promise this will be shorter - and not only is it because I don't see much I can add to the previous reviewers, but because ...

Timmy here Okay, this will be short. There isn't much to say in this chapter, except to stutter out a mile of praise before claiming my rightful place as the ...

Timmy here! Things aren't exactly "brightening up" in this chapter too much, but at least there is less beating involved and Sadie and Brandon aren't around as much to continue ...

Timmy here Now this was a really powerful chapter. I think you used the thunder storm to full advantage here, and it was a really wonderful idea - the panic ...

Timmy here So this chapter really advanced the scene, and brought us closer to how bad these nanny's are. I don't actually understand why they would be in charge of ...

Timmy heeere! This will be a short review as there isn't much for me to say, really. The chapter is very, very good, and even though it's all about severe ...

Timmy here! I think I will try to write this review as I did the other one, because pointing out grammar and punctuation mistakes, few as they are, will not ...

Timmy here GUESS WHAT I am actually caught up, and I think I may stay that way. A shocker, right? I mean, me not writing reviews for the latest chapters ...

Timmy here! Back to reviewing on this piece. I know it has been, uh, a day or so since I did a review for you. Must think I died. hee-hee ...

Timmy here! hehe, I like this guy, Timothy. He sounds so cool. *smiles innocently* So I am seeing the helpfulness of Cora in this chapter more, even if she appears ...

Timmy here So after reading Deanie's review, I don't really know what to add. Her review is very detailed about the issues with this chapter and everything... so I don't ...

Timmy here! So instead of reading through and just giving you some not-so-great advice on how to fix some common errors with punctuation and misspellings you're not worrying over since ...

Timmy here! This chapter was funny, and I like how they have a somewhat normal environment where Rease is at. The grandparents are funny, and I love how they act... ...