TimeWillRemember

Greetings! As per request, let's have a proper look at your work ;) I'll start with commentaries/opinions in unerlined italic and grammar mistakes (also structure and sense) in bold , ...

Good day! Continuing from your Eyes Wide Shut 1.1, let's get to it ;) Everything was as I predicted when I walked through the door into the kitchen. Harriet glanced ...

Good day ;) Without much further ado, I'll start by reviewing your story part by part, offering my impression / opinion and some nitpicks as I go. Because we are ...

Hi! Have to congratulate you on getting the rhythm down, it's not an easy thing to do, even though I have to admit 4th stanza 4th verse was like tripping ...

Hi! Nice to see another work of yours, Pen, this time a novel. I've skipped reviewing 1st chapter, since it had many already, and would proceed with the 2nd. From ...

Hello! First off, a bit of a nit-pick. "See what time's cruel fingers wrought? Erasing empty hull from the thought Voice will grace the halls no more the only sound ...

Hi! First off, I'd like to nitpick a bit, so here goes. "He stood and stepped toward the door that led outside, the tempest outside had harsh winds and arctic ...

Hi! First off, "Whether she is doimg it for me.", you've mistyped doing. The emotions in this poem are apparent and it's an easy read, it's a good straightforward piece, ...