Tikaya

You know what, you should give up on me. I cannot read this in the correct order. What am I even doing.

Don't forget this event got extended so you can technically log all your reviews there too :3 [I'm not rly a poem reviewer so I'll usually only grab them when ...

No problem Alex :) I'm glad you wrote a short story I could read and I did like the concept! At times it felt more like a poem than a ...

The trick for fluffing up paragraphs I found is... just holding some minute descriptions of the room/area back and drop them in between dialogue XD Like instead of writing You ...

Anytime Messenger :) Grammar/Syntax/Punctuation are essential for readability. That's why I point them out; it's what I appreciate in reviews too [Especially because they are usually easy to fix @.@] ...

:) Yes, I think if you emphasise how deliciously annoyed she is at not having an easy enemy that would be excellent. There is so much fun to be mined ...

You answered the questions too!! Thank you :3

Guess you're right ^^

Fellow Fern enjoyer, I see =D

Then it's even more promising, that ending. I'm happy for you getting better, Cats :3

Alright, I have a few more question if you feel up to answering them :) 1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? 2) What did you like best? 3) ...

I'm happy you liked the review. And if you start posting here again, I'll probably start reading from the beginning this time :3 Have a great day from me too!

I think it's fine that you don't expand on Dexter. As for being dropped in, you can start the story like this. You just need to be more careful abt ...

Yup I did miss that line. I'm sorry :(

I accept the explanation about teleport getting stronger :)