Tikaya

:) Yes, I think if you emphasise how deliciously annoyed she is at not having an easy enemy that would be excellent. There is so much fun to be mined ...

You answered the questions too!! Thank you :3

Guess you're right ^^

Fellow Fern enjoyer, I see =D

Then it's even more promising, that ending. I'm happy for you getting better, Cats :3

Alright, I have a few more question if you feel up to answering them :) 1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? 2) What did you like best? 3) ...

I'm happy you liked the review. And if you start posting here again, I'll probably start reading from the beginning this time :3 Have a great day from me too!

I think it's fine that you don't expand on Dexter. As for being dropped in, you can start the story like this. You just need to be more careful abt ...

Yup I did miss that line. I'm sorry :(

I accept the explanation about teleport getting stronger :)

Isn't part of the fun for an author seeing when the readers realise certain twists? At least it is for me :) It's what I try to replicate in the ...

As for the restaurant, I was confused bc of the timeline. I don't have a good grasp on how long they spent at the party.

Oh I rly like him going to the party just bc he doesnt want to be home at all!

Aww thanks for the response. I see what you mean with associating sadness with blue. Should have thought of that! :3

Jup I figured this was Marcus. I just think he wasn't well foreshadowed in this one and it took too long to get to the good part xd