Tikaya

Hah why wouldn't ppl circle back to stories that are less than a month old??? Especially when they are this well-written? XD

i know, you mentioned that in the other reviews. I think the ending isn't that rushed, more the transition to it XD

hah it feels kinda odd that I finally had some concrete advice for better poetry. I do not like this. Nooo I don't wanna leaaarnnnnn

"I was trying to play with enjambment while still keeping my distinct verse patten, hope it doesn't come across as too off putting.." No it was fascinating! Happy for it! ...

I only really like Murtagh and Thorn from Eragon so that's the only part I truly remember ^^ "This made complete sense in my head" Yeah, THIS, this so much ...

ah okay, that makes sense. I think I was too grossed out (deliberately so XD) to really think abt the fact that: hey, human meat probably doesn't look any different ...

Dissecting stories is part of the fun, isn't it? Oh I am so curious where this all will lead and what insidious thing is keeping our guy from defenestration XD ...

I'm glad you found my comments helpful. I do be looking forward to the other letters :3 I didn't know English had claimed recherché like that @.@ Wieder was gelernt~

Yay I learnt something again

No I don't know who that is but I am ready to learn~

Then I'm even more intrigued why they kept her imprisoned! :3

Like, the muse’s poem kinda got me on the side of the painter and now the opposite is happening. The way the painter talks abt their craft makes me appreciate ...

Okay, I think I have confused myself with this Maybe I will come back to that... "they love them today because they feel obliged to, having loved them yesterday." That ...

Ach Alex

Ok I am like super duper tired but I started reading this anyway and I want to say: PLEASE FRIEND find it in yourself to stomach all the other chapters ...