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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 2
The Dice are biased =D Here we are again, let’s see where our mentally unwell sylph is going :3 Hmmm again I feel like you front-load wayyy to much description. ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 2
In my country we are calling this the looping order. Like with knitting! Don’t look that up. Siiigh No wonder I was so thrown off by chapter “2” Let’s find ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Chapter 3
So after a weird detour over the prologue I have finally reached Ch2. And my usual spiel continues: beautiful sentences 😊 But I do have things to say other than ...
Jan 8 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 1
So since there’s no more Loosely Lawful to read and your NovMo project isn’t out yet, I put a slot of “something else from Vento” on my dice rotation [yes, ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 15: To Life
Ya know that it’s the AN itself that makes me not want to read this every time I open this chapter? I just… I really hate it when authors throw ...
Jan 8 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 1
Hey Ravena, the dice chose you again (you have 2 stories in the running after all =D) I really like the beginning already, and how clear it is that we’re ...
Jan 8 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 2
So I lit up a candle in celebration of the dice choosing Delirium Ch2 😊 And we’re still sticking with Lydia, good to know. Let’s see what diabolical things the ...
Jan 7 -
Re: Book book
Good Morning! That is a very long chapter. Have you thought about maybe breaking it up into multiple uploads to make it more palpable to readers? Second thought of the ...
Jan 7 -
Re: Chapter One: Donut Crumbs 1.2
Alright, the dice chose this over 15 other options =D Hi Lady, as promised, I have come for your story. And I kinda hope that this is the right one ...
Jan 6 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 1
The dice have spoken and chosen the first chapter of Delirium for me to read 😊 Let’s head straight in! And my first thought is… that you could be more ...
Jan 6 -
Re: The Hope of a Kingdom
Good evening, Messenger 😊 Felt like doing a final review today and I like focusing on stories so much more than focusing on poems ^^ Hmm I already feel like ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.
Hi SanaPathan, I have so many things I want to read now that my Green Room work has winded down that I resorted to rolling dice. Congratz, the dice chose ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Lovers in Blue
Hey Alex 😊 A short story is much more up my alley =D Hm I find it a bit strange that we are talking about celestial objects and then you ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date
Alright, what a warning ^^° Here we go. But first, grammar. I cannot help myself. Something’s wrong with this sentence: “the sound of people laughing and talking filled the air, ...
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Re: Surrender
Oh does that mean the sun? "The marble has gotten colder" That's a really nice metaphor! Remember that you need a dash for bone-deep :) Annd we're at the TW ...
Jan 3
