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Re: Leaving Maven Hills
Oh I like the phrasing “bringing her into a hug”. I need to remember that :3 I also like how we are efficiently told why Alessia is leaving Maven Hills. ...
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Re: hand in the wolf's mouth
Ohhh I like the title in relation to the summary already (otherwise I might have been a bit too slow to immediately understand what the poem's abt!) This definitely is ...
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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scene's 15-16)
Hui look, I refound the link to my Green Room Witch sign off (Is refound a word? It should be!) Anyway, the script! Ohh we are introducing invisible walls now! ...
May 21 -
Re: Dylan’s got some demons
Ahhh Dylan’s side of things! I remember I was rather sympathetic (up until he went and murdered his wife) to him. And I never understood why he kept making more ...
May 21 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scenes 13-14)
Fine. I will start reading it again xd The descriptions are all working very well for me. I also like the way you described the historical events in scene 13, ...
May 21 -
Re: Is freedom all sweet in Heaven?
And one more, you are a prolific reviewer too afterall ^^ I still wish there was more context to your short stories… just some more information to set the scene, ...
May 20 -
Re: A clown will always sweep a ballerina off her feet
Heya creeper. It’s been a while. I wasn’t feeling too well but now I’m better ^^ I kinda like the title already 😊 (Also took a peek at the related ...
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Re: अगर सब कुछ याद न रहता
I want it to be known that I tried getting so many other ppl to read this but alas, to no avail. While, here goes nothing, let's hope translation software ...
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Re: Monster under the Bed
Heya ^^ Allow me to take a look at this poem of yours. It’s been in the Green Room for so long ☹ I like the personification of fear! It ...
May 20 -
Re: diagnosis
Another work that is out of order in the Green Room. Why is the sorting so awful qq First of all, I like how you spread out the word “anomaly” ...
May 20 -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 5: Crowded
Okay since I read these chapters back to back now, I have another thought: Not only was the ending to last chapter a bit unsatisfying… you also don’t really resolve ...
May 20 -
Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 4: Fearful
I’m doing a bit of a catchup on all the stories I missed while I was ill and could only concentrate on short poems for weeks on end~ Last time ...
May 20 -
Re: prayers without answer (revisited)
Oh what an evocative poem. I find the word choices very poignant and visceral… even if I am not entirely sure about the true meaning. I just found myself becoming ...
May 20 -
Re: sooner than later (happy birthday, darling boy)
Since I am about to become a mom, I guess it is only fair that I read a story about the first birthday of a child (at least I assume ...
May 20 -
Re: Hallowed Ground | Chapter One
Morning Scarlett :) Told you I would show up to check this out, soon-ish ^^ Hmm feels like the first paragraph has a tad too many short sentences :3 But ...
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