Tikaya

A very heavy subject matter, so I did read with care. My first thought, as always, is about the writing style and I feel like it could use a bit ...

Love the introductory line. Gets one right into the story! I like what it says about Jason that he's willing to spend 5 hours on a girl who didn't pay ...

First of all, I really appreciate the synopsis at the beginning. I also like this part: to Ruelle they were an alluring portal into an ancient kingdom of grand legends ...

So, first of some random thoughts I had while reading: I like the interspersed short questions like "Hey what's wrong" or "what's this?" Aren’t you supposed to be getting better? ...

Love the beginning you chose for Tale 12. Sets the mood and the descriptions are really immserive! I like how Miranda's own obsession with her phone or rather the digital ...

Hi hello, here for a quick review! First up: Really interesting way to order the words, I love how it works to cement the message of the poem. [Must admit, ...

Okay after doing a few reviews for other people's work, I'm back on familiar ground. Hi creeper :) I just want to say that I've read so much of yours ...

Oh I immediately felt intrigued by the line: "Advance ahead from a pupa" because I didn't really expect it nor have I really thought about using a pupa stage as ...

Okay, putting on my still very-unfamiliar poetry hat. I like how you use the dove in the first paragraph to hammer home that the battle has been senseless. I also ...

I feel like the paragraph starting with "Demeter was chosen as a delegate for an important convention." could use more variety in sentence length and word flow. Also that you ...

I like how this story shapes up to be about how different people/cultures communicate and that you need to be clear about what you want and what is okay for ...

Hello there :) Coming in out of left field with a review. I like that the MC thinks long and hard about how to go about asking Aaron out with ...

I find it interesting that the girls think of watching TV as a bonding activity. There's already so many stereotypes about the activity so I think this is new and ...

First of all, LOVE the style of your chapter. The pictures and the cool font! Also I love the name of the story. I remember my wife playing Eldenring and ...

Hi there, another review for you :) I like that it's a sign of god that she got Green streaks in her hair. Idk it's just a cool detail to ...