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Re: TEETH / 2018: chapter 2
I finally found the time to read the second chapter, let’s go! I like the consistent narration! The next she knows, her body is jolting awake. Hmm this one does ...
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Re: Poison
Hia Hop! I’m pretty sure poems are outside of my usual wheelhouse and I had this on my list for a while now! (which fits the summary xd) Ohh and ...
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Re: The perfect childhood
Hia I came here for the Checklist Challenge !~ Welcome to YWS (Or rather WriterFeed!), hope you’re doing well :3 I like how you’re not only talking about the unachievability ...
Sep 4 -
Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 4, 5, and 6
Good afternoon, creeper 😊 Let’s look at another story in the Poppy verse! which was a food stand made to be frightening. I feel like all the other descriptions were ...
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Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 4 (still WIP)
Morning Dom! Finally found a moment to read this :3 Well Rob coming out swinging after probably having an inkling on what went down. “Sit in my lap” huh? =D ...
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Re: Indominus Prime:The Genesis
I'm kinda confused why you called this your original story but then tagged it as fanfiction? :) I would have loved to know what the general reaction to the fact ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Eleven: The Warehouse
Hmmm I always thought it would be Mayflower Park @.@ Ohh I do wonder if ppl on ships would have been safe from the plague since they couldn’t be coming ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Seven: The Warehouse
Heading straight into the next chapter 😊 or been killed by them. directly …in their cars? Now I am kinda wondering how they managed to block the entire road @.@ ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Five: The Warehouse
This truly is an A/N I can get behind, good work :3 Now let’s see if an earlier introduction to Greer will get me on board with his character XD ...
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Re: My Norse Story, chapters 7-8
Well well well, after a slew of reviews which had no context, HI, girl with context here! =D Hmmm is “gentlemen” already a word back then? It did take me ...
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Re: Carrieta’s origin: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate
I’m taking a bit of a break from reading abt Norse ppl to read some more WWHH =D I am so ready to get some backstory for the adults in ...
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Re: My Norse Story, chapters 5-6
Good morning Amanda! I have come for the next two chapters ^^ “There must be a rational explanation.” Alvis surmised. I feel like you could put some sort of description ...
Aug 29 -
Re: My Norse story, chapters 3-4
Hia again. The dice favoured your story so let’s do this. Since your chapters already have a longer reading time (trust me, the majority of readers balk at anything longer ...
Aug 28 -
Re: The Clock
Hia Pebble! I had this on my read list for a long time so here I am :3 Ohhh already I can see a lot of things will fly over ...
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Re: The Stone Baby
Decided to read something from my long list of bookmarks today. Hia Redhood! I did not forget that you asked me to read this, however long ago (and you certainly ...
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