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Re: The Indomitable Human Spirit [Ch. XXI, Nine]
Good morning XD I feel like the quote of the day is quintessentially GOATSAMA huh? And I am kinda thinking that Nine is also praising the dude in the first ...
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Re: Nobody likes the basement
Ok last review of the day đ Hmm interesting premise. Letâs see what you make out of it. I like how you describe Davonâs thoughts. I just wish you would ...
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Re: Bethelâs origin
Ohh Bethel. I am so curious how this guy got the way he IS in later chapters! Bring it on! Welllll that is one heck of an intro sentence and ...
Jul 15 -
Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, U.S.A. : Part Seven
And Grasscove next, the other thing you pinged me abt (which is btw not necessary, I catch all the Green Room works hehe âitâs just the Janice chapters are not ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Eight
Alrighty, refreshed my memory a bit before heading into this! Last time: Amanda! Letâs see how she got here! Oh what an interesting first paragraph. I like the description with ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 5
Good morning!! I do like the questions she asks herself in the beginning⊠tho I feel âHow could she have let herself be absorbed in this book?â comes in a ...
Jul 15 -
Re: Prince Josephâs origin: Witchâs Wonder, Hellâs Hate
Yay, more Witchâs Wonder!~ Love the first sentence. I like how you show WHERE he is and also what his current problem is :3 But then, I feel like the ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Daniâs origin: Souls and Roses đđ©·
Letâs look at this one next~ Wellll either she canât feel it and therefore doesnât notice the hurt or she does feel it but ignores the pain, right? Here: even ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Paigeâs origin-The Laurence familyâs deepest woes
Good afternoon, creeper! Is Paige capable of going through walls? Thatâs what I think off when I read âshe sunk into her parentâs roomâ; that she was in the room ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 13 (Part 2)
And good⊠noon? Midday? Here for the second part, in any case! Hmm we get Shadow reading Jaridâs thought but no internal commentary for what this means to Shadow. Tragic. ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 13 (Part 1)
Good morning! It took a while but your story finally came up in the Green Room sweep đ (And look at the progress in the Green Room!!) Last time, Shadow ...
Jul 14 -
Re: Giselle-Alice and the aliens
Good afternoon đ Letâs read some more of the Aliens story :3 Maybe, in the first paragraph summary, you could have specified why the cafĂ© was so special for your ...
Jul 13 -
Re: Raining Cats and Dogs [Ch. XX, Nine]
Ohhh what a cover image!! Hia, Tikaya here with the right headspace for more Nine :3 Well tbh nothing ever can really put me in the right headspace for Zero ...
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Re: mona grows quite bored of room 711
Hia howâs it going? đ I distinctly remember another poem about the louvre, now that you mention it⊠I really like the image of the metal ribcage, especially in conjunction ...
Jul 13 -
Re: Entry for a (not-so-private) journal
Hia! Oh man âč Is the narrator here based on yourself? I already find it sad that not only is the narrator âgivenâ away but they also end up in ...
Jul 13
