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Re: Paul's Trip to Saturn
Hey Jenthura! A quick review for the contest. I liked the concept, of Paul taking a "trip" to Saturn. It reminds me of something I've read before on YWS, something ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Paul and Paulette
Hey, Bean! I'm Tiger and I'll be your reviewer for today, as a judge in the contest. Right, so there are some good points to this. At the start, it ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Hush
Hey Ty! Welcome to YWS; Tiger and I'll be your reviewer today! :) So, this is quite a beautiful piece. Beautiful in its descriptions, in the ranges of emotion displayed--especially ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: How Paul became yellow
Tiger here to review for the contest! First of all, the story concept was great. The idea of the alien race of Greyes and their monotonous life is quite interesting ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
This is a beautiful poem. From what I've read (after going over it twice ;)), a young woman has started life as a nomad, because she's running away from her ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: The Great Sufferings of Paul
Tiger here to review for the contest! Well, first off I have to say I like the idea of the story. Paul being an alien on the human world is ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: The stuffed toy applicant
Tiger here to review for the contest...or really just comment seeing as Rasca's gone over the grammar. ;) This was hilarious. Adding Artichoke was a nice touch (in fact, I'm ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow of life
Rainbow of Life. Rainbow . Not Rainb b ow. It's amazing that other reviewers noticed another lesser typo, and not this huge, glaring one. That aside: I'm Tiger and I'll ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Ludicrous Love
I apologize for the delay in reviewing; I'll try and get to those points that Dreamwalker and the others missed. Sorrow and joy, Black and white, Yin and yang, Day ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: That Sacred Slut
To be honest, there isn't much to critique here. Demeter has pretty much covered everything, so I'm just here to comment, really. The poem was very powerful, with a strong ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Solstice
Hey, Azi! (I shall call you this for some time yet ;)) I shall be your reviewer for today. :D Long before I am alive enough to feel it, my ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
Tiger here to review, per request! So, this is an interesting start. Interesting as in, the concept seems very promising, rather Inception-y actually (though perhaps not, I haven't actually watched ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: The Fisherman
As usual, this is great. Something I've noticed about your stories (at least, with the exception of The Forger's Apprentice) is that they are usually written in the theme of ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter one
Tiger finally here to review! Sorry for the wait, but over the next few days I plan to finish your reviews (and maybe review the other chapters, too). Caleb yawned. ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)
Tiger here to review (actually, suggest)! I apologize for getting here so late, I really do. So I've read this several times, and I like it. Roger, despite his obnoxious ...
Jan 25, 2011
