TiffanyToy

Thanks so much for the reviews! :)

Thanks so much :)

I only wanted to randomly comment because my name is Tiffany too.

Thanks! And Happy Halloween to you too!!

Ok! Thanks! I'll try to change up some things!

Thanks! I used both of your suggestions! Thank you!

Welcome. It was fun reviewing!

Ok, Thanks!

But in the story, the liquid changed color only as the container it was in moved.

What? Lol.

Yes. That's what I changed it to. Just a simple typo, though. :P

Thanks ...

Thanks! I changed those few errors. I am not sure what to do for the last one so if you had any general ideas, that would be appreciated ... :)

Before even reading this, which I plan to do so in the near future, I just wanted to say that I love the shape of the poem.

Ok! Thanks for clearing that up for me!!