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I liked it, it was a good short story but I confused myself while I read it lol. Was it only the girl narrating or was it both her and ...

That was a good poem. ^-^ I think it was fairly well written be there could be some adjustments. Meep, other than that I don't think you should change anything ...

Thank you both for your critism, I really needed it. Lol, I hate critism because it makes me irate but I really do appreciate it. I'll start revising tonight and ...

I love it because it was real love that both they experienced but it was sad because they were so different and could never be together in the end. It's ...

Ok, I know it kind of goes quick but I'm in the process of editing that. I just wanted to post a less edited version to get the feeling of ...

I know that the introduction goes kind of fast but it's to set the environment and the feeling of the setting. Meep! Be harsh in your critisism if you must ...