Threnody

Hello! This really caught my eye and I felt the need to review it. It's extremely intriguing and I like the style that you begin to set up, though I ...

Hey A, I gotta say, in my opinion, this is a great piece. I definitely get what you were trying to convey with it and the aggressive frankness you used ...

Hello! Overall, I believe your style was very consistent and you showed evident mastery of literary technique. However, there were a few things I noticed that I thought should be ...

Hello! Here is the review as you requested. I would like to start off first by saying that I love your idea. I've been fascinated with Greek Mythology but I ...

This is a really sweet poem Remember!! And it's not bad, you're getting there! Here's just a few comments: I met you when I was to young to understand True ...

Hey, not bad for a spur of the moment poem late at night. Late at night is when the best ideas flow. :D I hate it when people pick every ...

Hey Perseph! This is a wonderful poem and I don't have very much negative things to say about it. (Read my other reviews... that's saying ALOT :D ) Anyway, if ...

Hey Rainy, this poems great... it made me smile reading it. Here's just a few comments: Dry spell, dry spell, go away! Don’t come back, any other day! • Nice ...

Awwww..... poor dog.... :shock: I am so sad for him. Is this meant to be a short story or a free-form poem because either's cool with me, I'm just here ...

Hey Skye, lovely poem! Actually, I understand that it's not supposed to be "lovely" so I'm going to say that it's pretty. Lovely has such negative connotations... Anyway, here's a ...

Hey Nekros, I think this poem is very well written. I love your style, it's effortless and flowing and I want to be in the place your words create... Deep ...

I thought this script was trying way too hard to be funny. There's a lot of physical humour in this that is somewhat of a cliché. Also, the general idea ...

Interesting poem... yeah. So anyhow, I like your disclaimer at the beginning but I think that if you don't feel the emotions, than you can't really describe them enough to ...

Actually, Flyer, I thought this poem was rather nice. It flowed particularly well, and told a good story. The rhymes do cripple it somewhat however. Most of the time you ...

Very sweet poem. Here's just a few comments: 1) This poem seems to contradict itself with every line. This seems to be a broken heart poem, but also a redemption ...