ThothMagic

Whoa! That is a great story. The only things I could find in there that were wrong were the occasional punctuation error (for example: write "Stupid dress!" I yelled instead ...

This is a great story. It leaves me wondering what is going to happen next to the boy, and also what is going on with him. The way you write ...

REVIEW This is great, but according to the description, they live in a time of terror. More specifically, a zombie apocalypse. There were no zombies in the story, nor did ...

This is a very intrigueing story!!!! I love it. I like the ending the best, personally, but the entire story is great! I love the magic and the dictator's background. ...

I like it, but you need to work on the suspense. This is really interesting, though, and it sounds like it will turn into a great mystery. In the story, ...

Hmmm... Cons.... there are few, except for the occasional cliche. But even those are great! I'm glad that you didn't use the dumb/popular blonde cliche though in describing the popular ...

This story is amazing! I love how it starts out as a teen fiction, then turns into something way more serious, dangerous and magical. I felt like I was Jade, ...