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Ahhh this is so great! xD Good work =]

People need to review this! Gah! My comment and Kelly's are lonely!!

:] Hahaha! Nice, Izzy. The "water bowl" part caused a lot of confusion. Also, I couldn't help but to have felt a little jealous in the beginning. Now I feel ...

Haha! :] Glad to hear it, Izzy. =) Thank you, all of you, for the feedback. It sincerely means a lot to me. :)

...why are there no breaks where there are different stanzas? Is this just my computer? This completely messes up the poem...

Since you objected, I won't give critique on trivial things like grammar. However, I will say that this was a very moving piece. I will not say I understand, no, ...

:] Thanks, all of you, so much. I had no idea this would actually be liked. =D! You've all made my day. My past two days, actually. :)

Hey Pink Socks! I apologize for the gap in time, and the misconception regarding your name. =] Now, back to the reviewing... “Hey, Mom!” my brothers’ voices boomed through all ...

I just realized I had been calling you Blue Socks!! So sorry, Pink Socks. I guess I was confusing you with the last person who posted something. =P!

I just realized, I spelled "Grammatically", "Throughout" and "Its" wrong. I apologize.

hahahaha "voldy got pwnd". xD xD xD that was great.

:D I loves me some paradox. Thanks again.

:] Thanks Maggie. No, it isn't the I-know-everything tone, or at least, I hope it isn't. Really, those were just my thoughts at the time, and I didn't care whether ...

Wow, for a forty-minute story, that was pretty great. Very suspenseful. A had just a few issues with some things. Her mouth is still gaping, her big furry body weighing ...

One thing - "Still quicker and quicker are thoughts race past the ill kept clock" "quicker and quicker our thoughts..." I think, and "ill-kept clock" with the hyphen.