Theodorable

You did really good with this one. :smt041 You finally took words and made them rhyme without forcing them to. I really love the first two stanzas those were the ...

hey, this one was good, but it had a spelling error. "Though" should be "through" I think. You have come a long way from when you began, good job. :smt038 ...

That was totally awesome! Hi by the way. Your writing technique is soooo good. There is so much detail and I could actually see it happening. This could be turned ...

hey, this one didn't really impress me. :smt102 it was good, but it needs to flow better, it almost seems like you forced yourself to put a line the doesn't ...

I don't know how to reply to that, but i'll try. It was very clear that you were angry with your boyfriend and that you were leaving him, but the ...

I LOVE THIS ONE! :smt060 it is sooooooo sweet. It captures the childhood things and pairs them with things from adulthood. It flows and rhymes perfectly. A job well done. ...

hi! :smt039 this was really beautiful, and it doesn't need a thing changed. So you had better not touch it. :smt110 I loved this one, how she kept repeating to ...

hey! this was really good, but i have one question. is "load" meant to be loud? anyway, this is a good poem, all the opposites are perfect. This made me ...

this was a very good, very sad poem. :smt089 I loved it, but i hated it all at the same time. :? This was all emotion and written from the ...

This was really good. Although it could use some punctuation. And in the line " Love is like hate" it really doesn't work with the rest of the poem, the ...

I really liked this one, the shortness doesn't take away from the poem either. I really like this part: Then I slip Then I fall Then I scream Then I ...

hi! this one is in need of some punctuation! and i don't know, but it almost seems that you just wrote some words down on this one. it didn't really ...

hi! :D i'm new here, but i've been writing poetry for awhile, and you are awesome! i felt everything you described and i felt as if it was happening to ...

hey, this one was good, but there is one stanza that i don't understand *quote Just leave me alone! Let me in peace! Its hard enough Without your persuasion piece* ...

ha ha! i love this one. it is so true (most of the time) but you add some punctuation and let it flow better. *quote Creativity is taken away Work ...