ThemagicalEbonyFox

Awww you're welcome!

Thanks. I'm still new to poetry so I'll make sure to work on this.

Hi there. Thanks for the review. I'm still quite new to poetry, so I'll try and take this stuff on board in future.

Wow that was fast.

Is this an undertale thing?

No problem. :)

Sure. I need an excuse to review more often.

Yeah I have read the others. That's partly why it was so heartbreaking.

Thank you. :)

This is great.

Thanks for the review.

Thank you.

Thank you for taking the time to comment on this. I'll try and improve on this kind of stuff next time I write any poetry.

I'm not very good with structure yet so thanks for the tips.

Thank you for the feedback. :)