Thelios

I have to admit, you got me a little confused when I saw /a/...1991, but as I read on it, it fell into place. I like how you described the ...

As a previous smoker myself, I make a minor connection to this piece. You gave way to the reason the narrator started smoking. He tried to ease the pain of ...

It was short, gave good way to what underlying feelings there are. Liri trusts Sam to know she's sick. Sam is looking out for Liri, despite her denial. However, it's ...

This piece of music is good, the lyrics fit into what sunrise means, but what about the music? Is it a slow ballad like the sun rising, is it a ...

This piece was good and a quick read, but it lacked depth. We don't know much about the characters aside from names. Is Hal short, is he tall, does he ...