Thefadedphotograph

About the meaning. It's about a failing relationship, and the main guy knows that he's going to kill himself when it's over because her love which he has gotten so ...

Sorry about the refering to a lamp as the source of light in the bathroom in the prologue. Obviously there wouldn't be a lamp light in a truck stop bathroom. ...

A regiment is a large group of people, or, if you wish, something else---or it can have other meanings. The regiment in this is a group of cannibals. This poem ...

Although, Kyllorac, your review was a bit harsh; it was very helpfull. On the matter of that long line: I could find no place to split it that would benefit ...

On this I don't really need to explain about wether it's a boy or a girl because it's about me. I hinted it earlier when I spoke of my girlfriend. ...

I thought the emotion given to the situation was powerful and understandlable. Overall it was good. It was strong in stating the sitution a lot of overweight teenagers are in, ...

Thanks for the review. I do know that I was decribing a bit too much. It was about things that I do so I went a bit overboard. I don't ...

I thought this was a great idea, but a bit to quickly said. There are parts which aren't entirely clear but otherwise it was great and I wanted to read ...