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Re: Beyond the Sea
Hello! This is my review of your work! First, I think this is really a bittersweet piece. Even after a war involving radiation, it’s very heartwarming to see that the ...
Feb 25, 2025 -
Re: My Guardian Demon (Demo)
It’s a nice read. Thoughts: I love the imagery and the pace that you tell this short. It’s the little details that bring this short to life, it’s similar to ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: A Rainy Day in April.
My Interpretation:You are sitting there, depressed, watching the rain. Mourning for your efforts of trying to understand and work with someone. You blame yourself for hiding your feelings in the ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: Saints and Sinners
“A saint is someone who wears a mask or plays the fool. A sinner is someone who fights for individual freedom in society or one who doesn’t want to be ...
Mar 4, 2024 -
Re: Chocolate Chips as a Means of Fixing Friendships
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello! I’m thebroken and I’m here to review your poem! (It’s my first review so don’t attack me if it’s ...
Mar 4, 2024