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Re: Am Leaving Now
Hey there, thank you for your review, the criticism was appreciated. I have made some changes now. Hopefully the gaps would have been filled now. Do read and provide your ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: A Sad Poem.
Its always a pleasure to have your work critiqued by your contemporaries the world over. Always is. Yes, I do a lot of typos while writing the poems; but my ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: The Lion is a Communist(other side of morning)
Hey there. Reading your poem was a tad difficult honestly. But i believe (earnestly) that i made some headway regarding this matter after a few reads and some pondering. Your ...
Oct 19, 2008
