The_Vizier

hey there. Well it was simplistic poem. And the mood of the poem to a limit was dreamy, yet limiting itself to the particular incidence on which you wrote. Not ...

hey there, Beauty in words is not the demise of gods power of creation of tangibles. Rather its our inheritance from him. The poem was beautiful. Excelsior. The passing of ...

Hey there, First things first. You sure are onto something with that poem!! I mean that was insane !! (in the good sense of the word :P ). On a ...

Hey there. Reading your poem was a tad difficult honestly. But i believe (earnestly) that i made some headway regarding this matter after a few reads and some pondering. Your ...

Hey there. A very nice simple poem. I got not much to complain, but there was one thing that I felt seemed a little awkward here :- My eyes are ...

though not disagreeing with alexandraisonfire's views, i will have to differ a little here. you see the only problem i find with your work, leaving the rhythm aside ( in ...

There's a time when love'S labor is lost. it seems "a certain someone" proved to be a great motivation. Bravo. But i will concede here that, it took me a ...

Hey ya my man, yes you are a "man". Your poem is the outcome of a complex mature thought process, that's for sure. your poem seems to reflect a reality ...

It was a nice and subtle poem. It reminds me of the pressures we face each days of our lives be they peer pressures , parental expectation , or even ...