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Re: The Church is Bloodstained
Hey there! I'm really liking this poem. It's short, simple, and to the point. I think my nitpicks are personal preferences, but I'll give 'em anyway. :) Upon a second ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: do the waves make a noise when no one is listening
Hey there! I really like the tone of this. I get a sense of disjointed-ness on the narrators part. They seem to be struggling with love, an inner turmoil (depression, ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Panic Is the Brother of Procrastination
Hello! So here's my attempt at a proper review... I was immediately drawn to this poem by its title. I find it to be true through and through and the ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: What!?
Ha! I love this. It's so fun to read. I like how it does rhyme and that your rhyming isn't contrived, either. I'm also super impressed by your use of ...
Dec 8, 2013