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Re: War of 2201: Bank Job Interlude Part 1 of 2 (4)
Dear TheGreatIthy, I am The Written Chef and I have the honor of giving you a review today. To start off, let me aknowledge the fact that science fiction rests ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Yu-Gi-Oh Fanfic 'Skin' - Summary and Link (It's long...)
Dear UsagiSquared, First off, I've noticed you are a new member. So welcome to YWS and I hope you'll find many friends that are helpful to your goals and aspirations ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: What I need to survive, is what's killing me
Dear Demoness, Hello, my name is The Written Chef, and I have the honor of critiquing your work today! This was a very good poem. I get that her loved ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Dreaming By The Window (short story)
Dear Solvalery, Wow, you had some tough comments there! Hmmmm... It's ok girl, I'll help you out! My name, if we haven't been introduced, is The Written Chef. I have ...
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: Little By Little
Dear colie18, Hello there, my name is The Written Chef! I have the honor of being your first critique... First off, let me say your poem flowed very well, and ...
Oct 23, 2010 -
Re: My First Love
Dear iheartbooks, If we haven't met before, let me introduce myself: I am The Written Chef. Hello! :P Anyways, now to crack down to le business. First, I want to ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Angel Wars Chapter 1
Dear Leilani, Allow me to introduce myself. I am The Written Chef; a master of both food and the pen to which imaginations may derive. Yah, too much, sorry! Anyways, ...
Oct 16, 2010 -
Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
Wow, this is the first play like work I've read on here and it was HILARIOUS! You have a way with dry humor that makes plays stand out more. I ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Plunge
Why hello there Jane, I am who the peoples have started to call simply 'The Chef.' At this late hour I shall be one, experiencing my first flash fiction and ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Stupid writer's block.
Dear LadyP, I OMG know how you feel. My first work I submitted was about me and my darn writer's block. So the devotion to it is understood. It will ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Here it comes again
Dear RhaniGrace, Hello there this evening, my name is The Written Chef and others have started to call me just plain o' 'The Chef.' I have the pleasure of reviewing ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Camping
Hmmmmm... I can't seem to think where I wanna take this. While reading your poem, it sounds very smooth and sorta 'homey' at best. In a good way of course. ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: James, for Anne
Curious as much lol! It's not bad, but it is agreed that the thoughts are scattered. It's interesting at best, and if I was to ever get high in my ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
How interesting! It's quite short, yes, but for some reason I feel like I'm taken aback. It's kind of like I'm thirsty, but because of the repition I'm almost convinced ...
Sep 25, 2010