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Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 2 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected Again))
No problem! :D
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 1 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected))
This is really good :D I might do a full review later but keep writing!
Oct 23, 2014 -
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Thank you for the review! I'll remember to make a few more edits :)
Sep 9, 2014 -
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Thank you for the review! I'll keep this in mind when I write the next chapter :)
Sep 9, 2014 -
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Hi Sherri, thank you for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Now that I look back it seems very redundant with all the pronouns that I wrote. ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
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Hi Eve, most of what you mentioned I.e: Lena's parents and the soulless murderers are explained in the prologue if you wanna check it out. The "soulless murders" are zombies. ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: The Kingly Mammal
I like this poem :D I think it's a tiger...
Sep 8, 2014 -
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As for the details of the setting and the length, I kept it vague since it is only a prologue. Thank you for the feedback! :D
Sep 2, 2014 -
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Thank you for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Sep 1, 2014