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Haha, this was funny. I liked it :) Great take on rap! Enjoyable, Keep it up! -Truth-

Chapter 5 The school day was almost over, only biology left, and after a quick stop by my dorm to exchange books, I headed to class. Gabbe and I arrived ...

Chapter 4 Inside the library , comma we took a table behind the back of the shelves, concealing ourselves off from the rest of the grayish colour scheme of the ...

Nice poem there, it's perfect! I have no criticism :) Good job on the imagery and all of that. Keep on writing! -Truth-

Wow, I completely love this. It's awesome! Love how serious and intense it is. Keep on writing! -Truth-

Wow, I LOVE this! So beautiful, and perfect in my eyes. Keep on writing! Question... Can I quote this? -Truth-

Hey again! Sorry it took me so long to come back... I think the others pretty much said everything I wanted to point out. It's good you have been putting ...

Whoa! That's all I have to say, Whisperer got pretty much everything there :) Keep it up! -Truth-

Love this entirely. Keep on writing this beautiful things! -Truth-

Hey again :) Alrighty, let's do this again! I felt it. the pain , I mean. Just for a second. I remember, hearing her cry the sight of the blue ...

Hey sister :) This is beautiful... I don't think I've got anything else to say, it left me speechless. -Truth-

I have shivers... That's all I got to say. Keep it up, it's wonderful :) -Truth-

Hey again! I re-read the story and I love the changes you've made :) It flows better and it's easier for us to follow. Good job! -Truth-

Thank you! I didn't know what to put for the I went with that. It's boring but I couldn't think of anything else :? I'm open to suggestions.

Haha yeah, okay, I know it's pretty basic but don't worry, things are coming up soon ;) This is just the intro to situate you guys to were she is ...