TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello! Happy review day! I'm Truth and I shall review your novel today :) Let's start! Chapter One -Talia Marie Bourne- Brooklyn, New York City, USA Earth One year ago… ...

Rated for the content. I swear, It'll go down for a bit. And if someone could give me a better name then Diana Justice, suggestions are welcome. My mother always ...

AWH! I love this, it's so cute! I have a twin sister and I have to say you guys did a great job of portraying this 'partner in crime' relationship. ...

Hey, happy review day! :) I shall be your reviewer, so lets start! The first traces of life were yet to be seen, as the snow came down, and the ...

Hello :) Happy review day! So this was a very powerful emotional piece. You've done a good job of narrating it, really :) Not many mistakes, which is great, and ...

Chapter One : "Death is a rumour to the young." Not many people accept the fact that there’s life after death, I know I didn’t in my first realizing years. ...

Hello :) Truth here for a review! First off, keeping 10 chapters in one post is a really bad idea. I know that they are small... but keep it to ...

Prologue The old man, loosing youth while still gaining power, rubbed his wrists, now raw from the rusty chains that once burdened him. A young man, by the name of ...

Hello, So I won't correct this, for the simple fact that it would take away from the message inside. And what a beautiful message it was. These are timeless themes, ...

I never expected that my Friday morning would turn into yet another romantic roller coaster . Since Monday I hadn’t heard from Ben, so I thought it’d be best to ...

Hey, Truth here for a review :) PS: All my comments and corrections are made as I read and are only suggestions. You are the master :P ***Please note, this ...

Hey there :) Truth here for a review! Cast out all thine enemies. Ye shall utterly destroy all the places, wherein the nations harbor terrorists , comma and dwell in ...

Heyya! Truth here for a review, Ben Williamson was a mistake. He found this out as a young boy, living in a dingy, red-brick-against-grey sky type of building in Bedford, ...

Everyone has that messed up part of their family, whether it was their M om’s side or their D ad’s side, or even their grandparents’. Since you are starting with ...

Hey again :) After redrafting & rearranging parts of the novel various chapters have now been edited and moved about and I've also had to new chapters to link some ...