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Here it is... my amazing review, vaporized. Well, that was mean. So instead of going through this for a second time, I'll just do a fastforward version, okay? Here it ...

Hello there :) So, first impression... it looks very long. I know you'Ve got a lot to say but it discouraged me a bit. But, as I read on, I ...

Oh rap! I wasn't expecting this :) It's good, I'm doing my own little beat in my head to go with it. You've got the right swagger :) Keep writing! ...

Hey James! So I've done the first part already. Here to review the rest :) First, I'll do a quick grammar and nitpicks check So, to get a silver coin ...

Hey this isn't horrible at all :) I liked the theme very much. Sometimes people really need it and others, they just throw away our help. I loved the way ...

Hey Hannah! Here to review the overall story :) Overall, I really liked it. It seemed light and weird at first but it all accumulated to this ending, which I ...

Hey kitrosemon! Now, I'm a bit confused... is it werewolves? Vampires? Some kind of beasts? Or just weird Immortals? Please clarify this in the next chapter/this one. I've found some ...

Hey Broken, I'm here to review! First off, I've got some nitpicks, The sun was beat ing down on her dark hair, causing her to walk faster, which exhausted her ...

Hey again! I think Navita has mentioned everything :) I only got to say the plot is slowly unfolding and we are learning a bit more on what's going to ...

Hey Lukan! This is a beautiful poem. I really liked it :) I loved the rhythm it had and I loved the repetition in the first two stanzas, transferring from ...

Hey Wickedwonder! I thought the narration was actually done really well for 2nd person :) I don't like them much either but I think you did it well because, for ...

Hey! First, I'm really curious of what will happen next! I've got some nitpicks too...mostly some little typos. The words sounded meaningless, like I could care less. Like she could ...

Hey Forestqueen! I'm here to review as promised :) This story is good. I've studied ancient Greece and so, while reading it, I was making all the links :) There ...

Hey! While reading this, I could totally relate to this! It's pretty much everything I'm thinking... even though I am only 2 years away, schools are already stressing our decisions ...

Hey! I'm here to review the second chapter :) Nipticks: It took over an hour for us to check in and get to our gate. We didn't have to wait ...