TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello again :) Here for chapter two! “You do not know about this war, my dear?” the elder asks. “No, I don’t know anything about this war. Just today, my ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth and I shall attempt to review this. I haven't been on her in a while so forgive me for the mediocre review that's coming... With ...

No comments on this... I shall review! I woke up with a weird feeling in my stomach. Rose was still sleeping beside me. I didn’t remember when we had gotten ...

Hello! Truth here for a review :) Chapter 2: Hundreds of Miles away Laila Hundreds of miles away from Corrigan , comma a young girl stepped out of the shower ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, nice to meet you! I shall review this chapter of yours. Comments in bold, corrections/suggestions in red. Keep in mind that anything I change in ...

Wow this was great. I really like your style of writing :) The only thing is that the sentences seemed to stretch on and on, like Kels said above... some ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! One human is born, Many others killed. One creature loved, Others destroyed. I really love how you started this. Take some, give ...

Happy review day to you :) I'm Truth and I shall review this chapter of yours today. First I want to point out that your novel isn't linked together... and ...

Hello there, Truth here for a review :) His foot trudged forth further into the deep; mere steps to his endless journey. I knew him. Before he Like Crook said ...

Under a tree is where I sit. Under this tree is where I wait. Under my tree is where I ponder, about my looming, inevitable fate. Under a sky is ...

Hey again :) I wasn't sure about the scene thing so I went straight to part 2... Recalling Afternoon. Summer break. It's hot and boring. No one will ever live ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth here to review! This is a bit hard to read because there's some mistakes here and there so I'll correct as I go and explain ...

Hello! First off, happy review day! I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer today :) I'll start with my corrections and suggestions in red and my comments in bold, ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! Comments in bold, corrections and suggestions in red :) “Don’t cry, Nemzi , comma ” Papa said. I ...

The Roads from My Door The path , comma it goes from my doorstep, This would sound better if these were two separate lines Onto open roads and ways, It ...