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TheStormAroundMe

Poetically Arranged Chaos

  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Demolition Lovers

    Thank you for reading it! The couple kissing under the stoplight used to make me think about love, but the cars are rushing through the intersection and effectively crushing them. ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Demolition Lovers

    Thank you for reading my poem!

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Demolition Lovers

    Thank you for reviewing! I'll take anything I can get.

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Demolition Lovers

    Thank you for reading it! By saying "teenager or adult," I meant the moments before I was a teenager, the moments before I was an adult. I hope this clarifies... ...

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Demolition Lovers

    Thank you for reading it!

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: If Only

    I have the same problem with Microsoft Word! :)

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Ashes, Ashes (LMS Story 2)

    Thank you for reading! Quinn is experiencing dissociation, which means his mind is distant from his body. Hence the second-person perspective. He is not within himself. Therefore, he cannot think ...

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Ashes, Ashes (LMS Story 2)

    Thank you for reading it! This bit There was that one story where a lady got killed on a subway. Dangerous stuff. Your body is a fifteen-year-old boy, but serial ...

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Hook-Up Shoot-Up (LMS Story 1)

    Thank you for reading it! I'm not a prostitute myself, so the prices were indeed an issue. Thanks for clearing it up; I'll try to fix it right away. As ...

    Feb 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: a title?

    Thank you for reading it!

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Artificial Flavoring

    Thank you for reading it! I didn't mean to insult people with those identities directly, only point out that we made up legitimately every single label to make ourselves feel ...

    Feb 13, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Artificial Flavoring

    Thank you so much for reading it!

    Feb 12, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Artificial Flavoring

    Thank you so much!

    Feb 11, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Artificial Flavoring

    Thank you for reading!

    Feb 11, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: a title?

    Thank you for reading! This poem was a ton of fun to write because I didn't have to worry about traditional poetry no-nos. I didn't capitalize the "I"s on purpose, ...

    Feb 1, 2017


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