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Re: Song dynasty story
It's good!
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: The Duck And The Cat
I like that story over all. I wounder how the Duck and cat tied into the story. I wounder who beat the little boy. Did he have a home? And ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: Mei, part I
This is very great story with lots of good adventure. I wounder if there could have been some more dialogue. I loved all the good facts about China. I would ...
Mar 11, 2016 -
Re: China story
I wounder if you could not make the sentience more complex. And not to make this story so one event after another. Good story over all!
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: China story
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Mar 9, 2016
I wounder if you could not make the sentience more complex. And not to make this story so one event after another. Good story over all!