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TheSoundOfRain

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Disconnected

    I wrote a poem very similar to this that I'm considering posting, it was kind of a weird combination of prose and poetry. It was about an experience I had ...

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Stalemate

    Ah, what tragedy could drive you to wishing for prune-dom and produce exile? I think I can only just fathom something of that magnitude. At any rate, I've been the ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Cocaine Rush

    Ah, imagery is such a nice thing when it's done correctly. Sometimes people throw in corny metaphors that make you scratch your head in puzzlement. "Why on Earth did he/she ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: You think you know me?

    Man, I think that I greatly appreciate you writing this. That last verse was so classy. And, Jesus as my witness, God willing, bitch, you never will. There is something ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Clan

    I have to say that I'm really very charmed by this poem. It isn't often that you find this kind of unique flow, while still incorporating rhyme. I feel your ...

    Sep 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Penny for Your Thoughts

    Yo, yo, yo! I'm not even black but I said yo three times! Time for dis supa white review. So... Major mother-frickin props on the first stanza. It's like deep ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Then It Came

    It is a challenge, I think, to be so original with a blend of cliches. Cliches are, of course cliches because they are true, and represent the thing they do ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fragments

    I was drawn here by your tagline. Quite frankly I love things that are meta. So, there was intrigue before I arrived, and it stuck around for the duration of ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Note For a Date

    I suppose it would be best to take it stanza by stanza, little pieces are easier to chew or something.... I am no good at words to speak and so ...

    Apr 29, 2013


There are darknesses in life and there are lights, and you are one of the lights, the light of all lights.
— Bram Stoker