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Re: Disconnected
I wrote a poem very similar to this that I'm considering posting, it was kind of a weird combination of prose and poetry. It was about an experience I had ...
Sep 7, 2013 -
Re: Stalemate
Ah, what tragedy could drive you to wishing for prune-dom and produce exile? I think I can only just fathom something of that magnitude. At any rate, I've been the ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Cocaine Rush
Ah, imagery is such a nice thing when it's done correctly. Sometimes people throw in corny metaphors that make you scratch your head in puzzlement. "Why on Earth did he/she ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: You think you know me?
Man, I think that I greatly appreciate you writing this. That last verse was so classy. And, Jesus as my witness, God willing, bitch, you never will. There is something ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Clan
I have to say that I'm really very charmed by this poem. It isn't often that you find this kind of unique flow, while still incorporating rhyme. I feel your ...
Sep 4, 2013 -
Re: Penny for Your Thoughts
Yo, yo, yo! I'm not even black but I said yo three times! Time for dis supa white review. So... Major mother-frickin props on the first stanza. It's like deep ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: Then It Came
It is a challenge, I think, to be so original with a blend of cliches. Cliches are, of course cliches because they are true, and represent the thing they do ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: fragments
I was drawn here by your tagline. Quite frankly I love things that are meta. So, there was intrigue before I arrived, and it stuck around for the duration of ...
Jun 29, 2013 -
Re: A Note For a Date
I suppose it would be best to take it stanza by stanza, little pieces are easier to chew or something.... I am no good at words to speak and so ...
Apr 29, 2013
