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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A search for time

    Thanks for the feedback! Yes, I wasn't too confident on the whole cheese thing, but I wanted to do a play on words with this one. I was going for ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: Sixteen

    May 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Romantic Re: Teenage Diary Extracts 2

    YAYYYYY!!! :) So excited! Not that I like to see your sadness, but it's as if I am reading a fiction novel!

    May 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mommy, why?

    I respect your opinion, and I hope that you can respect mine. Thank you for the review, and if you felt like I was forcing my opinion onto you, I'm ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mommy, why?

    Thanks! Fortunately I wrote this not from an experience but just from an opinion.

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mommy, why?

    Thanks for the feedback! The motivation for writing this piece has nothing to do with an experience I have had or anything; just an opinion that I wanted to share. ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mommy, why?

    Thank you for the review! I do understand both points of the controversial issue, and I really appreciate you speaking in a non-aggressive tone. That's why I decided to write ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Why care ?

    I not only love HOW this is written but also WHAT is written. I think this poem brings out the deepest emotion of the reader. I know I have had ...

    May 10, 2015


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