TheShauzer

I don't know what just happened, I typed an apology but it wouldn't go through. I read through the comments and I am genuinely sorry. Where I live it's a ...

Jesus Christ. I hate to say but just because this is the young WRITERS society it doesn't mean you have to write an essay on every little thing. I used ...

How did I imply that? Retarded is an actual term, you're thinking about it in the derivitive sense, I wasn't. And literately is to do with literature, different word to ...

It's not an ABAB rhyming scheme, the first doesn't rhyme with the third. Fierce and Curse don't rhyme, I know that; I'm not literately retarded :') Thanks for taking the ...

Thanks a lot lili :) I don't like the numbered stanzas either, I just wasn't able to understand YWS's formatting :') I do now though, so yay!

Thanks a lot lili :) I don't like the numbered stanzas either, I just wasn't able to understand YWS's formatting :') I do now though, so yay!

Thanks a lot lili :) I don't like the numbered stanzas either, I just wasn't able to understand YWS's formatting :') I do now though, so yay!

Thanks HH, a lot of helpful critique in there, it's meant to be 'in' heart-felt conquest, sorry! And I guess the rest just went better with the flow ;) I ...

Thanks Bliese!

Haha :') thanks sushi, any critique you offer is usually helpful!

Thanks a lot for the review:) love when I actually get something to work with! In the end we found out they were related, and the boys death made the ...

Hey retro, thanks for the review! I was trying to display a different one of her qualities in each stanza ;) Thanks again!

Sorry, for the confusion, I never meant to be one of them ;) thanks for the kind words, I'll try to look at some of your works :)

Thanks Phoenix ;)

Thanks a lot LittleFox, I appreciate the review ;)