TheRebel2007

Thanks!

Thank you for the review! :p

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review, Plume! And yeah, I myself thought that "stir" didn't quite rhyme with "stars", that... just doesn't sound well. I will edit with something else someday, thanks ...

Thanks for the review! :p The first line is actually the narrator's perspective of how the day would look like. Although it is indeed light that actually dawns, for the ...

Thanks for the review! And yes, it was a typo in that line. Thanks for pointing that out! :p

Thank you so much, Shayna! :p

Thanks for the review, Hikari!

Thanks for the review, Liminality!

Thanks for the review, Pragya! This is just a nonsense lol

Thank you so much, Aurora! :p

Thanks for the review, Plume! I am definitely gonna correct out the mistakes. :p

Thanks for the review, Wolfe! Um, I do think the poem has got an AABB pattern, but yes, the syllables are a little off (a lot actually, in some parts), ...

Thanks for the review, Plume! :p

Thanks! :p