ThePretentiousEnema

Simple, raw, yet cute and effective. The imagery is beautiful and the metaphorical aspect of it is very easy to grasp. It was an easily-digested poem, which I love. Simplicity ...

Well, well Pen. I'm starting to get the vibe that you and I just don't artistically connect, at all. You don't seem to realize where I'm coming from, what I ...

Sorry for the sloppy reply, but I'm very tired at the moment, I hope you can see past the spelling mistakes. Thanks for the review anyway, I really appreciate it!

To me, it's always been more important what the reader perceives of the text than my original intention. I write these little thing to move through some pain or make ...

I appreciate the kind words, but when I wrote this I was in kind of a weird place, emotionally. I read it just now for the first time in almost ...

You're always so lovely to me! :)

Well, I got what I asked for, it seems. I'm the getting the vibe that you are just a tidbit biased when it comes to me, aren't you though, Pen?

Thorazine was a drug previously used to treat schizophrenia. And pharynx is a part of the throat. The point of the poem is more about conveying a feeling than making ...

I didn't want to be too specific, but since the mentioning of factorial alarms, I always imagined the narrator to live next to some industrial part of town. So the ...

There is no punch-line, really. I just fell in love with the idea of a suicidal schizophrenic shut-in observing a futuristic fascism regime through a window; no hope, just order.

Holy crap, what the hell was I thinking? I mix dem English words up sometimes... Thorazine is old-school, which is why I picked it. I thought it went well together ...

Thank you! I'll think about it! :)

Also, what makes you think the child is a baby? Obviously he/she is old enough to have intelligent thought.