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Re: Return Of The Heir Prologue
thanks this helps a lot I felt like it was missing something, and I'm glad you thought it sounded like a film that was kinda how I pictured it
Apr 24, 2021 -
Re: Return Of The Heir Prologue
If ur reviewing please be as blunt as you want this is a first draft so I'm open to any suggestions
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Avenger Interns chapter one part 2
Thanks for the review You made some good points
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: don't try to stop me
a short poem but I can tell it's saying a lot great work sad, but still great
Apr 21, 2021
