TheMaskedAstro

oh I see, my bad, must have read it as Families for some reason. Sorry about that.

Ah, Thank you! I fixed most of what you said but I think there is only one thing I need to change. Also I added a bit more, and i'm ...

Hey nice poem! Just have a minor suggestion to capitalize your I's but other then that it's a great poem! Also possible capitalize the beginning of each sentence as well. ...

I really like the deeper meaning of this poem, it has a very nice theme to it. I'm assuming it's about someone who is looked up to who has to ...

Hey, just wanted to give a quick review. Your story is great and I really hope you continue the story. I would recommend a bit more dialog of characters and ...