TheMarauderBandit

Oh, my dear, dear, Red. Can I just applaud you, first off? I'd like to congratulate you on such wonderful wording, because this seriously was wonderful. It all flowed, it ...

Can I just state that this was one of the most well-written poems I've read yet on this site? Trust me, it's not often that I pay attention to poems-- ...

Well, I can admit that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Hooking me from the beginning, your writing didn't let me down-- it kept me interested the entire time. And everything ...

Alright, to say the least, I loved this poem. Not adored. And it's certainly not the most wonderful thing I've read ever. But I loved it. And don't take offense, ...

This was very interesting. First off, I love how you wrote it. For me, though, the sentences seemed a bit awkward. Prime example here being: "The other child’s clothes were ...

Very nicely done, Peng. Well, I liked the description. It all flew very well, and though it was a bit vague, I could catch glimpses of scenes. It all played ...

There a few grammatical mistakes here and there (such as not capitals, etc.) and the spacing was a bit confusing, but that was really the only thing I disliked. Despite ...

First off, I'd like to compliment you on your wording. It was absolutely graceful in the way the words played out. I'm not much of a first-person fan, but you ...

Other than a few minor grammar mistakes here and there, this was absolutely marvelous. I'm not much of a romance fan, but I knew that I'd love any of your ...