TheMadWriter

In a way, Ivan is as calm, calculated and fearless as he is nervous and fearful. He just feels fearful FOR something in particular.

Ivan is going to get pretty tall once he stops growing. As for Ivan caring for the tower, Ivan is the only one who tries to improve it not just ...

To address Ivan 'leading' them then telling them to go. Note that Ivan didn't say to follow him, they followed out of their own vocation.

Italics for thoughts? Hmm...maybe... Dan could just walk there and be there in 20 minutes but Americans are way too lazy for that. In the part of Europe I live, ...

READ THE PROLOGUE PEOPLE! READ THE PROLOGUE THEN COMMENT ELSEWISE, SHUT UP!

If you like this then check out the previos chapter and prologue. (not in that order)

Read. This. Again. I have modified it so it fits the first chapter.

I have modified it so it works with the first chapter so READ IT AGAIN!

YEEEAHhh...I put no thought into this. At all...forgive me... The asterisk are there to place hold the last name but I guess it could be removed. As for the 'picture ...

Another thing to note, Ivan is telling the writer the details that he knows. Which leads to some conjecture, very accurate conjecture, but conjecture nontheless

It was first chapter I ever wrote so I never put much thought into it. The chapter's I 'm working on are much better in descriptive aspects so yeah thanks.

I will take this in to consideration but please I need you to understand this much...Ivan is not writing this! Someone else is! And not to forget...this is the first ...

O...M...G What was that my psych evaluation!? That was so, so...TRUE! How do even?! Okay, okay, breath in, breath out. That was (I will probably blow up Disneyland for this) ...

*Applauds* Bravo! May all who read this head it's warning. Seriously though, my condolences, and may you remember to tell those around you how much you care. In short, a ...

Very nice. I think that you hit the hammer on the head there with the whole wanting to fly thing. I look forward to more by you.