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Re: A letter to the Phoenix - First Evolution - Chapter 1
Very good writing, it's just very, well small. If all this was one chapter that would be great but it isn't. It is just on idea per chapter and needs ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: The GR-8 Discovery- Prologue
I think this is a wonderful starter piece to your book. I would like to see more details like why Serena was orphaned(parents die or abandon her), why Dr. Katherine ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Sleepy
I will give my honest opinion here, not the best work i have seen. I thought that this poem could have been a lot better. I think you need to ...
Jul 2, 2013 -
Re: Warrior
Dude, this chapter from your book is the best i have read on this website and maybe ever! The idea of using God and the devil and demons is one ...
Jul 2, 2013 -
Re: Never Ending Game
An amazing piece of carefully edited and well thought out writing. That probably doesn't make sense but this book in intriguing so far. I think you have a gift and ...
Jul 2, 2013