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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Girl In The Meadow

    Hi! Thanks for the review and helpful advice. The only reason this story is so short and vague is that I have a word limit. So I tried to get ...

    Sep 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Other Meanings

    Thanks for the review! I was attempting to put a space between stanzas but for some reason when I published it the spaces were deleted

    Jun 18, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Get Over Him

    I did in fact, write it in two seconds ;)

    Nov 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I just ran over to my best friend's house and screamed into her ear "YOU NEED TO READ THIS POEM!!!!!!!" This is amaaaaazing. It is a shame you don't look ...

    Nov 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor Re: Liberities

    Hey! Well, first things first I really did enjoy this. It interweaved so much into just a couple paragraphs. It really is amazing how you can fall for someone so ...

    Nov 20, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Where I Stand

    Thank you, Pan! Thankfully this story is not due for some time so I have time to make corrections. This was a very rough first draft so I will be ...

    Nov 16, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lonely Sunflower

    You actually completely got my intention of the story correct. :)

    Nov 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: One sided love- Installment 2

    Hey! Thanks for reading. I know the second entry was a bit unoriginal. I mainly put it there as a place holder and plan to fix it when I have ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: One sided love- Installment 2

    Thank you! I'm trying to get more into Kendall's head so you can see how she thinks before diving into the conflict (which I have a small idea of in ...

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: One sided love- Installment 1

    Hey, the next installment is out. I hope you read, comment, and enjoy! -Niko

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Fading

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    This is good. It touches you and you feel a relationship with the speaker. I too have been through hard breakups and sometimes I feel exactly like this. I often ...

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: When He Nothing Shines Upon

    Ok so first the worst I always say. There was so much dialouge. I mean dialouge isn't a bad thing but too much can bore the reader to death (at ...

    Feb 23, 2017


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