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Re: The Girl In The Meadow
Hi! Thanks for the review and helpful advice. The only reason this story is so short and vague is that I have a word limit. So I tried to get ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Other Meanings
Thanks for the review! I was attempting to put a space between stanzas but for some reason when I published it the spaces were deleted
Jun 18, 2018 -
Re: Get Over Him
I did in fact, write it in two seconds ;)
Nov 22, 2017 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
I just ran over to my best friend's house and screamed into her ear "YOU NEED TO READ THIS POEM!!!!!!!" This is amaaaaazing. It is a shame you don't look ...
Nov 21, 2017 -
Re: Liberities
Hey! Well, first things first I really did enjoy this. It interweaved so much into just a couple paragraphs. It really is amazing how you can fall for someone so ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Where I Stand
Thank you, Pan! Thankfully this story is not due for some time so I have time to make corrections. This was a very rough first draft so I will be ...
Nov 16, 2017 -
Re: The Lonely Sunflower
You actually completely got my intention of the story correct. :)
Nov 10, 2017 -
Re: One sided love- Installment 2
Hey! Thanks for reading. I know the second entry was a bit unoriginal. I mainly put it there as a place holder and plan to fix it when I have ...
Sep 10, 2017 -
Re: One sided love- Installment 2
Thank you! I'm trying to get more into Kendall's head so you can see how she thinks before diving into the conflict (which I have a small idea of in ...
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: One sided love- Installment 1
Hey, the next installment is out. I hope you read, comment, and enjoy! -Niko
Sep 7, 2017 -
Re: Fading
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Sep 7, 2017
This is good. It touches you and you feel a relationship with the speaker. I too have been through hard breakups and sometimes I feel exactly like this. I often ... -
Re: When He Nothing Shines Upon
Ok so first the worst I always say. There was so much dialouge. I mean dialouge isn't a bad thing but too much can bore the reader to death (at ...
Feb 23, 2017
