TheGirlNextDoor

Dear moment, Congrats on your first story! The first one is always the most special, because it's the first time you actually put yourself out there. I liked that you ...

Dear WaltzingDream, As someone who has yet to see Phantom of the Opera (though I know several of the songs and plan to see it soon), I'm not exactly sure ...

Dear niteowl, Historical Fiction has always held a very special place in my heart, which is why I love reading and reviewing other people's historical works so much. Your story ...

Dear DappledCities, Wow. Literal shivers. I have goosebumps. This is amazing. Have you ever read anything by Virginia Woolf? She was a famous writer during the 1940s. Your writing style ...

Dear MaddieMouse013, TheGirlNextDoor here checking in for April Review Day. I'm so sorry it's taken so long for you chapter to get reviews--that must be frustrating! I'm going to try ...

Dear fight4whatisright, Wow. Just wow. I'm not sure what the first draft of your story looked like but what I just read is amazing. Good job. I can see what ...

Dear obliviousoracle, Can I just start by saying "WOW"? I went into your story not really knowing what it was about or what to expect and was pleasantly surprised. You ...

Dear Pocket, Although I'm not very good at writing poetry myself, I do quite enjoy reading others. What struck me about your poem however, is the lack common poetic structure. ...

Great dialogue. Each of your characters have their own unique voice that really come across well when reading. At the same time, all your chapter seems to be is dialogue. ...

Very interesting story concept. I think you have a great start here! Your writing could benefit from some more details and descriptions. Make the characters and the setting come to ...