TheEstimableEelz

This is hilarious, in a schadenfreude way. Also because of the way it's written. Love it. Love the not-quite stream-of-consciousness.

Nice poem, gave me a good sense of detached, morose, nostalgic longing/pining. Only criticism is that I think you should split up the "I don't remember..." line onto two or ...

Interesting. I like the structure you created. Disagree with the previous review - I enjoyed the simplicity of your language. The title, though, is a bit too direct and cliché ...

Welcome to the site! Liking this poem, I can feel Erika's style. (You've got a couple of grammatical errors though.) ^^;; Hopefully the site and you will agree for a ...

You're welcome! And I only suggested adding the articles because I thought your teacher'd want 'em, so it's all good. And hey, one of my poems follows very rigid rules, ...

Thanks for commenting! The poem is literally just a 'day in the life' of the cup. No hidden meaning whatsoever.