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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The World's Bank

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    I feel like this is less of a short story and more like an add or description. Don't get me wrong, I do like your work. However, almost all of ...

    May 21, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The World's Bank

    Note: This review has been deleted
    I feel like this is less of a short story and more like an add or description. Don't get me wrong, I do like your work. However, almost all of ...

    May 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Kittens

    I like this! It is very cute, very simple, very.....KITTENY! This deserves to be seen! Glad you posted it! There isn't very much more to say. I shall sign off. ...

    May 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Wander

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    This is pretty good. However, I don't like the fact that you used the lyrics from somebody else's work. You seem to have a lot of potential that you could ...

    May 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: He Is

    Thank you so much for your suggestions! I will think of that next time.

    May 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Extraterrestrial

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    This is very beautiful. Love the use of examples such as " I'm a splash of color on a white canvas". However, I feel like there is something that could ...

    May 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: My sweet sweet Lover

    I think this is great! I can tell that you poured your heart into it.

    May 20, 2017


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