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Re: The World's Bank
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May 21, 2017
I feel like this is less of a short story and more like an add or description. Don't get me wrong, I do like your work. However, almost all of ... -
Re: The World's Bank
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May 21, 2017
I feel like this is less of a short story and more like an add or description. Don't get me wrong, I do like your work. However, almost all of ... -
Re: Two Kittens
I like this! It is very cute, very simple, very.....KITTENY! This deserves to be seen! Glad you posted it! There isn't very much more to say. I shall sign off. ...
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Re: Wander
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May 21, 2017
This is pretty good. However, I don't like the fact that you used the lyrics from somebody else's work. You seem to have a lot of potential that you could ... -
Re: He Is
Thank you so much for your suggestions! I will think of that next time.
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Re: Extraterrestrial
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May 20, 2017
This is very beautiful. Love the use of examples such as " I'm a splash of color on a white canvas". However, I feel like there is something that could ... -
Re: My sweet sweet Lover
I think this is great! I can tell that you poured your heart into it.
May 20, 2017
