TheChristianWriter

Speed review, sorry. Anyways, This is very beautiful! I think it reflects on memories and the effects of time very well. However, I feel like the use of the word ...

This is very relatable and deep. Some walls must have had to come down to put this out on the internet where anybody can judge it in whatever way they ...

I always expect the best in people's work. This was very good in many ways. I like your vocabulary and use of descriptive words. However, I feel like it could ...

I feel like this is less of a short story and more like an add or description. Don't get me wrong, I do like your work. However, almost all of ...

This is pretty good. However, I don't like the fact that you used the lyrics from somebody else's work. You seem to have a lot of potential that you could ...

This is very beautiful. Love the use of examples such as " I'm a splash of color on a white canvas". However, I feel like there is something that could ...