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This is an older poem of mine, that I found when I was flipping through my notebook the other day. I'd really love some criticism, tell me what you like, ...

Scene One(Curtains open to a high school lunch room. Three girls are sitting at the end of a crowded table. The girls are talking in hushed tones, as if they ...

Take me back to the land of pretend,where Prince Charming isn't a lie.Where mermaids growlegs, where peopledon't age.Where love never ends,there are no pleading eyes.Lies.I thought I'dfound my way bac

Hello out there, this is part of a small poetry anthology I'm working on for my creative writing class' final project. Criticism and suggestions would be greatly appreciated, because then ...

Another poem from my final project this semester, a rough draft. Criticism needed, please!"Raise the bar."It seems pretty highalready,if you ask me.Pushing,sacrificing,stressing.For this be the succee

This poem will most likely be part of my final project for this semester, so please, if you have any advice or suggestions, go at 'er!a word thatdescribes me?average.the definition:typical.common.ordi

Another poem part of my final project on stereotypes. (I promise I'll stop posting so much, haha.) Please, criticize away! I'd really appreciate my peers,at least.Teachers, they appreciateme.Worked ha